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My Desire by ~arescat:iconarescat:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Darkness falls, loanlyness consumes me
My skin tenses, searching for your touch
Nothing, but my desire

I shake it off, dread hanging over me
I need you, my soul longs for you
Nothing, but my desire

Light dances on the walls
Your angelic light, silloueted in the doorway
Nothing, but my desire

My heart races, casting the dark away
You've returned to me, together again
Nothing, but my desire

Drawn to you, desperate for your warmth
I loose myself in you, compleatly
Nothing, but my desire

I feel your around me, expulsing my demons
Your spirit engulfs me, freeing my soul
Nothing, but my desire

Darkness again, wet with sweat
I feel you linger, the warmth remains
Nothing, but my desire

Everything an illusion, you were never here
The darkness returns, loanlyness engulfs me
Nothing, but my desire...
©2003-2009 ~arescat
:iconarescat:

Author's Comments

Someone I've come to care about, is currently living to far away. It's eating away at me from the inside. Someday I'll show her this, but right now all I want is for someone to listen.

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*darklion Oct 21, 2003, 12:02:55 PM
I've been through a long distance relationship just recently myself. The girl i was with lives all the way across the us from me. It sadly didn't work out between us for many diferent reasons but for you it might. This kind of relaitionship is very hard and sometimes very painful. All i can truely say advice wise is hang in there pal. Enjoy what you have with her and eventually it may go further, there will be a time when you will see her again if you both want it bad enough. And yes i'll listen, i'm good at that lol. if you get this hit me up on aim some time, i'm useually on between 3 pm and 5pm mountain time. :)
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~fala Oct 21, 2003, 12:35:28 PM
aww, this bought tears to my eyes, you really should show her, if it was me I would die.. I mean, I wish someone would write peoms to me.. She's really lucky to have someone like you!

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Butter is just dead milk
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~arescat Oct 21, 2003, 12:56:04 PM
Thank you.

I think it's more I'm lucky to have her :D , I'll be sure to show her in due time.

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Tragic artist?.... only thing tragic about me is my art :P
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~arescat Oct 21, 2003, 12:58:13 PM
It's always nice to know someone else is suffering too ;-)

I'll hit ya up on that offer sometime, thanks.

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Tragic artist?.... only thing tragic about me is my art :P
:iconfala:
~fala Oct 21, 2003, 1:00:56 PM
your super sweet she she is lucky, like I said I wish I had a guy that'd write me

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Butter is just dead milk
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~krazedkazoo Oct 21, 2003, 3:05:21 PM
Awww.. :sniff: That is so sweet! .... :O_o: And sad. :tears:

....


Well.

I've never had a boyfriend so I wouldn't know the feeling, but I have a good imagination! O_O EH! See!! Get happy! Youse got a girl and I have nothing!!

...

Fifteen years and not a single guy...

Oh, fu<k. I depressed now. :lonely:

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:) :) :) :fork: :) :) :) :)
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~arescat Oct 21, 2003, 4:18:25 PM
I'm so sorry... and surprised. 0_o
How could such a cute and energetic girl like you not have caught the attentions of a few guys? I'm sure the guys in your area will catch in pretty soon.

Anyways the guy who said "it is better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all" needs to be kicked in the throat. Being away from someone you care about hurts even worse then it did when I had no-one special in my life. When your with them it's worth all the pain though.

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Tragic artist?.... only thing tragic about me is my art :P
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~arracraidira Oct 22, 2003, 5:42:43 PM
But isnt it better to have loved anyway, even if you end up getting hurt in the end? That is pain well earned, however it may hurt- and those scars are ones that may still heal in time. It may not be someone I know, friend, but never give up on ANYTHING. EVER. Otherwise you doom yourself to allways carrying that pain with you. But you did capture that well- it was an unexpected surprise; and very emotional. Very well written, and well- I hope you work this one out.

It IS better to have loved at all, than to never have the courage to in the first place, whatever the cost. That is what being human is all about, and the pain lets us know we're alive.

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alienation, your children are dead to you
but their dreams are alive
they will rise up;
and where will you be then?
you will be lost
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~krazedkazoo Oct 23, 2003, 4:19:40 PM
(pets arescat) Hope you get your girl!! ^o^ Smooch her! :kiss:

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